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   교정강사   Gen(C)    등록일   2022-03-02
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  I mixed water and oil but I couldn’t do it. I want to have healthy body. I don’t want to play active game. Do not dig our garden. I like simple style of clothses. I have my view on this meeting. Many insects are eaten by birds. I am so sleepy. What is the root of this problem. A total of 10 people buy it. I won the soccer in the finals. Look at the movie scene. Give me the prize. I won the game. I don’t like my new nickname. Don’t touch the pan. It is very hot. I usually watch a cartoon at night. I want to be a leader of our club. The coach is giving sign to the player. I found out where your money is it. I help you when you were in trouble.
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I mixed water and oil but I couldn’t do it. 

I want to have a healthy body.

 

I don’t want to play active games.

 

Do not dig our garden.

 

I like simple style of clothses​ ---> clothes

I have my view on this meeting. 

 

Many insects are eaten by birds.

 

I am so sleepy.

 

What is the root of this problem?.(Punctuation)

 

A total of 10 people buy it. 

 

I won the soccer game/match in the finals. 

Look at the movie scene

 

Give me the prize. I won the game.

I don’t like my new nickname. 

Don’t touch the pan. It is very hot. 

I usually watch a cartoon show/movie at night.

I want to be a leader of our club.

The coach is giving sign to the player.

 

I found out where your money is it.---> I found out where your money is.

I helped you when you were in trouble.​