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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-30
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  As I told you in our class, I bought 5 pieces of face towel on the Intenet mall the day before yesterday. I got those, I first checked out their quality. It was good. Actually, I payed a small money for that, so I was worried for its quality. I wanted to buy one more package on that mall, so I connected to the site. But they were all sold out. I regret that I bought only one package. I often buy some items online. Online mall sells with a cheaper price comparing to offline store. As I can see the pictures of the item I want to buy, Sometimes I have to return it. My husband says, "Stop buying online, you are almost addicted to shopping." Nowdays, I am trying to forget it. Learning English is one of my efforts for that. Honestly, I am now almost addicted to playing table tennis.
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As I told you in our class, I bought 5 pieces of face towels on the Internet the day before yesterday.

I got those, I first checked out their quality. It was good. Actually, I paid small amount money for those, so I was worried about their quality. I wanted to buy more packages in that store, so I went online. But they were all sold out.  I regret that I bought only one package. I often buy some items online. Online shops sell with cheaper price compared to offline stores. As I can see the pictures of the items I want to buy, Sometimes I have to return it. My husband says, "Stop buying online, you are almost addicted to shopping." Nowadays, I am trying to forget it. Learning English is one of my efforts for that. Honestly, I am now almost addicted to playing table tennis.