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   교정강사   Niah(C)    등록일   2022-03-10
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  A. Describe your friends. My best friend Choi so yun is a member of junior volleyball team. She is very cool and kind. I like her personality. B. Make these sentences into English. (03/10/22) -안녕, 얄미야, 너 어디 가니? -나 집에 가. -우리랑 같이 놀자. -Hi, Yalmi. Where are you going? -I'm going to home. -Let's play with us.
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A. Describe your friends.

My best friend Choi so yun is a member of junior volleyball team. She is very cool and kind. I like her personality. (Correct)

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(03/10/22)

 

-안녕, 얄미야, 너 어디 가니?

-나 집에 가.

-우리랑 같이 놀자.

-Hi, Yalmi. Where are you going? (Correct)

 

-I'm going to home. --> I'm going home.

-Let's play with us. --> Why don’t you play with us?

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.