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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-03-11
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  A.) What are the common worries of men? Please elaborate your answer. I think the common worries of men are going to army. Because in korea, going to army is neccessary for men. So their graduations are delayed. B.) Make these sentences into English. (03/07/22) -그는 공을 힘껏 찼다. He kicked ball powerfully. -Peggy는 공연을 녹화 중이야. Peggy is recording performance. -그 나라는 과일을 수입한다. The nation import fruits.
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A.) What are the common worries of men? Please elaborate your answer.

 

I think the common worries of men are going to army. Because in korea, going to army is neccessary for men. So their graduations are delayed.

=> I think the common worries of men are going to the army. Because in Korea, going to the army is necessary for men. So, their graduations are delayed.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/07/22)

 

-그는 공을 힘껏 찼다.

He kicked ball powerfully.

=> He kicked the ball hard.


-Peggy는 공연을 녹화 중이야.

Peggy is recording performance.

=> Peggy is recording the performance.


-그 나라는 과일을 수입한다.

The nation import fruits.​ 

=> The nation imports fruits.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.