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   교정강사   Rome    등록일   2021-05-01
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  HOMEWORK: A. If you could be any animal (besides a human), which animal would you like to be? If I had such a chance, I would be a cat. I think cats are the most beautiful animals in the world. Now I live with my two cats and they are like treasures to me. For me, cats deserve to be worshiped. (like ancient Egyptian) If I could really be a cat, I would know a lot of things about cats and with the things, I can be a better master for my cats. B. Make these sentences into English. (04/01/21) -특히 컴퓨터 ``수요가 많습니다. Especially, there is much demand for computers. -조사에 의하면 한국에는 얼리어답터가 많습니다. According to the survey, there are lots of early adopters in Korea. -100명의 일본인을 상대로 한 설문조사에 의하면 저희를 위한 틈새 시장이 존재합니다. : ??
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HOMEWORK:

A. If you could be any animal (besides a human), which animal would you like to be?

If I had such a chance, I would be a cat. I think cats are the most beautiful animals in the world. 

Now I live with my two cats and they are like treasures to me.  For me, cats deserve to be worshiped. (like ancient Egyptian)

If I could really be a cat, I would know a lot of things about cats and with the things, I can be a better master for my cats.   ★★★

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(04/01/21)

-특히 컴퓨터 ``수요가 많습니다. Especially, there is much demand for computers. ---> There is a particularly strong demand for computers.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.


-조사에 의하면 한국에는 얼리어답터가 많습니다. According to the survey, there are lots of early adopters in Korea. ★★★

 

-100명의 일본인을 상대로 한 설문조사에 의하면 저희를 위한 틈새 시장이 존재합니다. : ??   ----> A survey of 100 Japanese people shows that there's a niche in the market for us.