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   교정강사   Rome    등록일   2021-05-01
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  A. Where is the best place to see animals in your country? Of course, there are several zoos in my country and they have a variety of animals. However, it is also good to see animals at the farm! When we visit a farm, we don't only see animals but also touch them with our hands! We can experience and feel animals. Isn't it cool? The animals are a sheep, a horse, or even a llama. If I have a baby in the future, I think it's better to visit a farm than to visit a zoo. B. Make these sentences into English. (04/06/21) -품질이 떨어지면 재주문이 끊길 수도 있습니다. Low quality can make reordering stopped. -고객들의 신용도 잃고 싶지 않습니다 : We don't want to lose clients' credit. -한번 잃으면 다시 얻기 어려운게 신용입니다. It is credit that is hard to get once lost.
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A. Where is the best place to see animals in your country? 

Of course, there are several zoos in my country and they have a variety of animals. 

However, it is also good to see animals at the farm

When we visit a farm, we don't only see animals but also touch them with our hands! 

We can experience and feel animals. Isn't it cool? 

The animals are a sheep, a horse, or even a llama. 

If I will have a baby in the future, I think it's better to visit a farm than to visit a zoo. ​★★★

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(04/06/21)

-품질이 떨어지면 재주문이 끊길 수도 있습니다. Low quality can make reordering stopped. ---> A drop in quality could lose repeat orders.

-고객들의 신용도 잃고 싶지 않습니다 : We don't want to lose clients' credit. ---> We also don't want to lose our customers' trust.

-한번 잃으면 다시 얻기 어려운게 신용입니다. It is credit that is hard to get once lost. ​---> It's hard to win trust back once it's lost. 


=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.