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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-05-02
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  I gave coments to the poems of the club members on the Internet website. I uploaded my poem on that site and checked out the comments about it. We never saw in person but share the same feeling about poem. I feel full when I read and write poems. I don't think I can write a good poem, but I am trying to write poems like my dairy. I read a lot of my poems yesterday. I knew that what was happened at this time of the last year through my poems. And it made me happy. I was getting calm and having my inner peace. Well, this is another thing. My husband and I tend to have a same weekend. That is, we do the same things on every weekends such as walking around the lake and the mountain, taking a walk at the park. Our life is very simple. Sometimes I want to do different things. Bye
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I gave comments to the poems of the club members on the website. I uploaded my poem on the site and checked the comments about it. We never see one another in person but share the same feeling about poems. I feel full when I read and write poems. I don't think I can write a good poem, but I am trying to write poems like my diary. I read a lot of my poems yesterday. I knew what happened at this time of last year through my poems. And it made me happy. I was getting calm and having my inner peace. Well, this is another thing. My husband and I tend to have the same weekend off. That’s why, we do the same things on weekends such as walking around the lake and the mountain, taking a walk at the park. Our life is very simple. Sometimes I want to do different things. Bye