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   교정강사   Niah(C)    등록일   2022-03-24
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  A. What 2 things that make you upset? First thing is making a trouble. For example playing dangerous or do something that can harm others. Another is makes me keep saying the same words. It's so tired and annoying. B. Make these sentences into English. (03/24/22) -멋졌어요! -많은 가수들도 봤니? -아니요, 보아 단독 콘서트 였어요. -It's was cool! -Did you see many singers? -No, It was a Boa's own concert.
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A. What 2 things that make you upset?

First thing is making a trouble. (Correct)

 

For example playing dangerous or do something that can harm others. --> For example, playing dangerously or doing something that can harm others.

Another is makes me keep saying the same words. It's so tired and annoying. --> Another is making me say the same words over again. It's so tiring and annoying.

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(03/24/22)

 

-멋졌어요!

-많은 가수들도 봤니?

-아니요, 보아 단독 콘서트 였어요.

-It's was cool!  (Correct)

 

-Did you see many singers?  (Correct)

 

-No, It was a Boa's own concert. --> No, I didn't. It was only for BoA.

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​​