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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-03-30
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  A.) What causes conflicts? Please elaborate on your answer. I think people's different conflicts cause conflicts. So I think people had better to adjust their thoughts with others. B.) Make these sentences into English. (03/28/22) -몸 조심하세요. Take yourself. -한국에 도착하면 연락주세요. Please call me when you arrive in korea. -한국에 갈 일 있으면 전화할게요. I will call you if I go to korea.
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A.) What causes conflicts? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

I think people's different conflicts cause conflicts. So I think people had better to adjust their thoughts with others.

 

=> I think people's different views cause conflicts. So, I think people have to adjust their thoughts to others.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/28/22)

 

-몸 조심하세요.

Take yourself. 

=> Please take care.


-한국에 도착하면 연락주세요.

Please call me when you arrive in korea.

=> Please call me when you arrive in Korea.​  { Please be aware that a country's name's first letter should be capitalized. For example; South Korea and Philippines }

 

 

-한국에 갈 일 있으면 전화할게요.

I will call you if I go to korea.

=> ​I'll call if I ever go to Korea. { Capitalization }


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.