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   교정강사   Jeraldine(C)    등록일   2022-04-04
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  BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC (3) ✨ What is your favorite winter activity? Why? I used to make a snowman, But they are so tired to make. So I love ride a sled. Because I'm so fun when I ride them. ✨ [Make these sentences into English] (04/04/22) -나도 보고 싶다. I miss you. -걱정마. 이번 일요일에TV로 볼 수 있을거야. Don't worry. You can watch on TV this Sunday. -너 어떻게 공원에 가니?: How can you get to the park? (THANK YOU SO MUCH)
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✨ What is your favorite winter activity? Why?

 

I used to make a snowman, But they are so tired to make.

So I love ride a sled.

Because I'm so fun when I ride them.

 

  => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.   

~I used to make a snowman, but it is too exhausting to make. So I love riding the sled now because it is fun riding it.

 

✨ [Make these sentences into English]

(04/04/22)

-나도 보고 싶다. I miss you. 

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.   

~I want to see it.

 

-걱정마. 이번 일요일에TV로 볼 수 있을거야. Don't worry. You can watch on TV this Sunday.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.   

~Don't worry. You can see her on TV this Sunday.

 

-너 어떻게 공원에 가니?: How can you get to the park?

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.   

~How do you go to the park?​