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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-05-03
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  Hi I don't watch TV so I am free now. I used to watch American sitcom Friends a few years ago. It was interesting. I wanted to learn English from the program and I was into the story iteself. So I watched it with Korean subtitles. Now, I no longer watch that show. As I am getting old, I can't relate with the characters who are in their 20's. OMG! they are the same age with my daughter. Anyway, I think that watching American drama is a good way to learn English. Nowadays, I watch Korean drama, Love and War on TV. It is about getting divorced. The story says why husband or wife wants to get divorced. Bye
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Hi

I am not watching TV so I am free now. I used to watch American sitcom Friends a few years ago. It was interesting.

I wanted to learn English from the program and I was into the story itself. So, I watched it with Korean subtitles.

Now, I no longer watch that show. As I am getting old, I can't relate with the characters who are in their 20's.

OMG! they are the same age with my daughter.

Anyway, I think that watching American drama is a good way to learn English.

Nowadays, I watch Korean drama, Love and War on TV. It is about getting divorced. The story says why husband or wife wants to get divorced.

Bye