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   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2021-05-04
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  A : I feel English is more difficult language than Korean. Because I'm Korean. So I'm familiar with Korean grammar system. When I study English, I should study unfamiliar and new grammar system. That's why what I Feel. B : - He painted and plastered. - Would you change the phone to your mother? - Our company should fire 100 employees because of the recession.
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A : I feel English is more difficult language than Korean. 

=> I feel like English is a more difficult language to learn than Korean language.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

      Because I'm Korean. So I'm familiar with Korean grammar system. 


     When I study English, I should study unfamiliar and new grammar system. 

=> When I study English, I must study about an unfamiliar and new grammar rules.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

     That's why what I Feel.

=> That's what / how I feel.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  

 

B : 

- He painted and plastered.

=> He painted and hung wallpaper.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  


- Would you change the phone to your mother?

=> Would you put your mother on the phone.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  


- Our company should fire 100 employees because of the recession.

=> We have to cut 100 workers because of the economic slowdown.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  

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