A. Why do you think shopping is addictive?

- I think shopping is addictive because it keeps stimulating people's desire to consume by displaying various products.

----------> I think shopping is addictive because it keeps stimulating people's desire to consume various products that are displayed in the mall or online. 

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

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B. Make these sentences into English.

-분실물 상세 기술서에 최대한 많은 정보를 적어주세요. : Please write down as much information as possible in the lost and found description. ✔

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-할 수 있는 건 다 해보겠습니다. : I'll do everything I can. ✔

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-우리 일행과 떨어졌습니다. : I'm separated from my party. ✔

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