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   제 목   In a high-tech world, will pencils still be needed?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-05-05
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  A.) In a high-tech world, will pencils still be needed? Please elaborate your answers. Sentiment from writing in a pencil could not be replaced by computer. So I think that pencils will still be needed even in a high-tech world. B.) Make these sentences into English. (05/03/21) -귀사의 상품에 대한 반응이 좋으면 주문을 늘리도록 하겠습니다. If your products get good response, we will increase the order. -시장이 호의적으로 변하면 더 주문하겠습니다. If the market changes favorably, we will make more order. -정기적인 주문을 점차적으로 늘릴 계획입니다. We have a plan to increase periodical order gradually.
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A.) In a high-tech world, will pencils still be needed? Please elaborate your answers.

 

Sentiment from writing in a pencil could not be replaced by computer.

=> Sentiment from writing with a pencil could not be replaced by a computer.​

 

So I think that pencils will still be needed even in a high-tech world. 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/03/21)

 

-귀사의 상품에 대한 반응이 좋으면 주문을 늘리도록 하겠습니다.

If your products get good response, we will increase the order. 

OR 

=> We will increase our order if your products are well-received.

 

 

-시장이 호의적으로 변하면 더 주문하겠습니다.

If the market changes favorably, we will make more order.

 

OR 

=> We will order more if the market becomes favorable.

-정기적인 주문을 점차적으로 늘릴 계획입니다.

We have a plan to increase periodical order gradually.

​​OR 

=> We plan to gradually increase regular orders.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.