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   교정강사   Rona(C)    등록일   2022-04-27
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  A. Make a journal about your best holiday. It was in 2020. I went to the ski resort first time. When I arrived the ski resort, I borrowed a snowboard. Then I rode a snowboard. I was excited. B. Make these sentences into English. 전데요. It's me. "안녕 얄미야, 나 심순이야. 너 뭐하니?" Hi Yalmi. I'm Simson. What are you doing? "나 피아노 치고있어. 무슨 일이야?" I'm playing piano. What happened?
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A. Make a journal about your best holiday.


It was in 2020. I went to the ski resort first time. —> It was in 2020. I went to the ski resort for the first time.

=> Corrected : The sentences were corrected grammatically.

 

When I arrived the ski resort, I borrowed a snowboard. —> When I arrived at the ski resort, I borrowed a snowboard.

=> Corrected : The sentences were corrected grammatically.

 

Then I rode a snowboard. I was excited. —> Then I went snowboarding. I was excited.

=> Corrected : The sentences were corrected grammatically.


B. Make these sentences into English.

 

전데요.

It's me. ---> Speaking.

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. 

 

"안녕 얄미야, 나 심순이야.너 뭐하니?"

Hi Yalmi. I'm Simson. What are you doing? ---> Hi, Yalmi. It’s me, Simsoon. What are you doing now?

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it. 

 

"나 피아노 치고있어.무슨 일이야?"

I'm playing piano. What happened? ---> I'm playing the piano. What's up?

=> Corrected : The sentences were corrected grammatically.