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   제 목   Would you rather visit Lake Eyre when it is full or when it is completely dry?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-04-28
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  A.) Would you rather visit Lake Eyre when it is full or when it is completely dry? Please elaborate on your answer. Lake Eyre is an extraordinary place which is difficult to be found in any other areas. Any chance to visit Lake Eyre can't be declined. B.) Make these sentences into English. (04/22/22) -이 책은 모두 해서 얼마 일까? I wonder how much all these books are paid for? -생각을 더 해봐야 할 것 같아요. I need more time to consider. -물건이 정말 잘 팔려요. Goods sell really well.
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A.) Would you rather visit Lake Eyre when it is full or when it is completely dry? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

    Lake Eyre is an extraordinary place which is difficult to be found in any other areas.

    Any chance to visit Lake Eyre can't be declined.

=>  Lake Eyre is an extraordinary place that is difficult to find in any other area.

    Any chance to visit Lake Eyre can't be declined.​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/22/22)

 

-이 책은 모두 해서 얼마 일까?

 I wonder how much all these books are paid for?  ✔

​

 

-생각을 더 해봐야 할 것 같아요.

 I need more time to consider. ✔​

 

 

-물건이 정말 잘 팔려요.

 Goods sell really well.

=> The goods are selling really well.​


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.