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   제 목   Should the Security Council make the United Nations’ important changes?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-04-28
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  A.) Should the Security Council make the United Nations’ important changes? Please elaborate on your answer. The United Nations has 190 member countries, which makes it difficult to reach an agreement. So a representative body is needed to lead decisions. The Security Council takes a role of it in the UN, which leads to its important changes. B.) Make these sentences into English. (04/25/22) -이번만 봐주시면 안 돼요? Please excuse me only this time. -난 연관되고 싶지가 않아. I don't want to be involved. -내 책임이야. I am sorry that it is my fault.
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A.) Should the Security Council make the United Nations’ important changes? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

 The United Nations has 190 member countries, which makes it difficult to reach an agreement.

 So a representative body is needed to lead decisions.

 The Security Council takes a role of it in the UN, which leads to its important changes.  ✔

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/25/22)

 

-이번만 봐주시면 안 돼요?

 Please excuse me only this time.

=>  Can you make an exception in this case?

 

-난 연관되고 싶지가 않아.

 I don't want to be involved.  ✔

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-내 책임이야.

 I am sorry that it is my fault.

=> ​ I take the blame. 


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.