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   교정강사   Jeraldine(C)    등록일   2022-05-02
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  BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC (4) ✨ What’s the best place you’ve ever been to? Why? I've been to the hot spring in the Japan. And It was my best place. Because I went to the Japan and it was my first time to get on a plane. Anyway, I went to hot spring at the last day of trip schedule. So it was great. ✨ [Make these sentences into English] (05/02/22) -이름이 나나에요. 그 애는 6살 이예요.: She's name is Nana. She is 6 years old. -무슨 옷을 입고 있나요?: What does she wearing? -줄무늬 티셔츠랑갈색 구두를 신고 있어요.: She wearing a stripe T- shirt and brown shoes (THANK YOU SO MUCH)
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✨ What’s the best place you’ve ever been to? Why?

 

I've been to the hot spring in the Japan. And It was my best place.

Because I went to the Japan and it was my first time to get on a plane.

Anyway, I went to hot spring at the last day of trip schedule.

So it was great.

  => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.   

I've been to a hot spring in Japan, and it was the best place I have visited.

It was my first time getting on a plane.

Anyway, I went to a hot spring on the last day of the trip schedule. So it was great.

✨ [Make these sentences into English]

(05/02/22)

-이름이 나나에요. 그 애는 6살 이예요.: She's name is Nana. She is 6 years old.

  => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.  

~Her name is Nana. She's six years old. 

 

-무슨 옷을 입고 있나요?: What does she wearing?

  => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.  

~What's she wearing? 

 

-줄무늬 티셔츠랑갈색 구두를 신고 있어요.: She wearing a stripe T- shirt and brown shoes

  => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.  

~She's wearing a striped T-shirt and brown shoes.