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   교정강사   Rona(C)    등록일   2022-05-03
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  A. Why do you like shopping online? Shopping online is better than shopping mall. If I have an online shopping application, Then I just stay at home. But I will go shopping at a shopping mall. I should go outside. B. Make these sentences into English. "너무 재미있다. 나는 스키도 타러 가고싶어." It's very fun. I want to ride a ski. "그래! 나는 스키도 탈 수 있어." Okay! I can ride a ski, too. 이번 주말에 스키 타러 가자. Let's go to ride a ski this weekend.
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A. Why do you like shopping online?

 

Shopping online is better than shopping mall. If I have an online shopping application,
Then I just stay at home. But I will go shopping at a shopping mall. I should go outside.

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Shopping online is better than shopping malls. If I have an online shopping application,

Then I just stay at home. But I will go shopping at a shopping mall. I should go outside.

=> Corrected : The sentences were corrected grammatically.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.


"너무 재미있다.나는 스키도 타러 가고싶어."

It's very fun. I want to ride a ski. —> It's very fun. I want to go skiing.

=> Corrected : The sentences were corrected grammatically.


"그래!나는 스키도 탈 수 있어."

Okay! I can ride a ski, too.


이번 주말에 스키 타러 가자.

Let's go to ride a ski this weekend. —> Let's go skiing this weekend.

=> Corrected : The sentences were corrected grammatically.