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   제 목   Will Imran Khan’s ousting bring instability to the country?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-05-09
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  A.) Will Imran Khan’s ousting bring instability to the country? Please elaborate on your answer. Political instability could be inevitable in democracies. The point lies in what causes it and whether effective system could resolve it before aggravating. Khan's ousting resulted from the no-confidence vote which is a constitutional procedure. Then it was resolved by electing his successor in the parliament. B.) Make these sentences into English. (05/09/22) -그냥 돌러 보는 거예요. I am just looking around. -좀 더 깎아주시면 안 돼요? Why don't you give me more discount? -정말 바가지다. You really rip me off.
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A.) Will Imran Khan’s ousting bring instability to the country? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Political instability could be inevitable in democracies.

The point lies in what causes it and whether effective system could resolve it before aggravating. 

Khan's ousting resulted from the no-confidence vote which is a constitutional procedure.

Then  it was resolved by electing his successor in the parliament.

 

=> Political instability could be inevitable in democracies.

The point lies in what causes it and whether an effective system could resolve it before aggravating it. 

Khan's ousting resulted from the no-confidence vote which is a constitutional procedure.

Then it was resolved by electing his successor in the parliament.

 

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/09/22)

 

-그냥 돌러 보는 거예요.

 I am just looking around. 

 

-좀 더 깎아주시면 안 돼요?

 Why don't you give me more discount?

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> Can't you cut it a little more?

 

-정말 바가지다.

 You really rip me off. 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.