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   교정강사   Rome    등록일   2021-05-07
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  I like minimal life style. And as you know, it is trendy these days. I do enjoy giving away the things I don't need any more. So, in my closet, there are only a few kinds of clothes. By uploading the things I want to give away on an application which is made for donations, I can share my old things with neighbors. Try giving the things away next time. It is worthwhile. B. Make these sentences into English. (04/15/21) -저희 회사는 재활용된 종이 가방을 이용합니다. My company use a recycled paper bag. -직원들에게 대중교통을 이용하라고 권합니다. We recommend our employees to take a public transportation. -저희 하이브리드 차는 휘발유나 배터리 또는 두 가지의 조합으로 가동됩니다. Our hybrid car is activated by gasoline or a battery.
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I like an ordinary lifestyle. And as you know, it is trendy these days. I do enjoy giving away the things I don't need anymore. So, in my closet, there are only a few kinds of clothes. By uploading the things I want to give away on an application that is made for donations, I can share my old things with neighbors. Try giving the things away next time. It is worthwhile. ★★★


B. Make these sentences into English.

(04/15/21)

-저희 회사는 재활용된 종이 가방을 이용합니다. Our company uses a recycled paper bags★★

-직원들에게 대중교통을 이용하라고 권합니다. We recommend our employees to take a public transportation.--- >We encourage our workers to use public transportation. 

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

-저희 하이브리드 차는 휘발유나 배터리 또는 두 가지의 조합으로 가동됩니다. Our hybrid car is activated by gasoline or a battery. ---> Our hybrid cars can run on gasoline engine, batteries or both.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

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