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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-05-11
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  A.) Will Venice’s visiting fees be a success? Please elaborate on your answer. Venice is very famous for its intricately decorated buildings which impress people. It seems that people want to visit it as if they did to museums or exhibits. As paying for them is not unusual, it would be natural to charge visitors for their entry to Venice. The number of visitors would not decrease although it charges for entry. So the policy will be difficult to attain the purpose. B.) Make these sentences into English. (05/11/22) -그 제품은 지금 재고가 없어요. The product is now out of stock. -저지방 우유 있어요? Can I have low fat milk. -든든하게 아침 먹었어. I had breakfast enough.
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A.) Will Venice’s visiting fees be a success? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

     Venice is very famous  for  its intricately decorated buildings which impress people.

     It seems that people want to visit it as if they did to museums or exhibits.

     As paying for them is not unusual, it would be natural to charge visitors for their entry to Venice.

     The number of visitors would not decrease although it charges for entry.

     So the policy will be difficult to attain the purpose.  

 

=>    Venice is very famous  for  its intricately decorated buildings which impress people.

     It seems that people want to visit it as if they did to museums or exhibits.

     As paying for them is not unusual, it would be natural to charge visitors for their entry to Venice.

     The number of visitors would not decrease although it charges for entry.

     So the policy will be difficult to attain its purpose.  ​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/11/22)

 

-그 제품은 지금 재고가 없어요.

 The product is now out of stock. 

 

-저지방 우유 있어요?

 Can I have  low fat milk.

=>  Do you have low-fat milk?​

 

 

-든든하게 아침 먹었어.

 I had breakfast enough.

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.