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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-05-18
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  A.) What era of fashion do you think is the best? Why? Please elaborate on your answer. I think the cozy fashion is the best. Because although beautiful clothes can give some mood to someone, it can't give cozy feelings. B.) Make these sentences into English. (05/16/22) -오늘 초과 근무할 수 있어요? Can you work overtime? -이번 토요일에 출근할 수 있어요? Can you work at saturday? -부탁 좀 드려도 될까요? Can I request it?
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A.) What era of fashion do you think is the best? Why? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

I think the cozy fashion is the best. Because although beautiful clothes can give some mood to someone, it can't give cozy feelings.

 

=>  I think the cozy fashion is the best. Because although beautiful clothes can give some mood to someone,  they can't give cozy feelings.

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/16/22)

 

-오늘 초과 근무할 수 있어요?

Can you work overtime?

=> Can you work overtime today?

 

-이번 토요일에 출근할 수 있어요?

Can you work at saturday?

=>  Can you work on Saturday?​

 

 

-부탁 좀 드려도 될까요?

Can I request it?

=> Can you do me a favor?


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.