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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-05-20
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  A.) Are people becoming slaves to fashion? Please elaborate on your answer. Actaully yes. Because sizes of clothes in korea are very small. so many people do diet very hard for the appearance. so some people ruin their health. B.) Make these sentences into English. -프로젝트에 대한 보고서를 작성하세요. Write the report of the project. -바로 시작하겠습니다. We will start right away. -최대한 빨리 시작하겠습니다. We will start as soon as a possible.
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A.) Are people becoming slaves to fashion? Please elaborate on your answer.

Actaully yes. Because sizes of  clothes in korea are very small. so many people do diet very hard for the appearance. so some people ruin their health.

 

=>  Actually yes. Because sizes of clothes in Korea are very small. So, many people do diet very hard for their appearance and some people ruin their health.​

 

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

-프로젝트에 대한 보고서를 작성하세요.

Write the report of the project.

=> Write the report on the project.​

 

 

-바로 시작하겠습니다.

We will start right away.

=> I'll start right away.

 

-최대한 빨리 시작하겠습니다.

We will start as soon as a possible.  

=> We will start as soon as possible. 

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.