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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-05-07
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  A.) What are the benefits of hot springs? Hot spring water is naturally heated and contains various minerals, Its warmth could help people relax their stress and alleviate fatigue or pain. B.) Make these sentences into English. (05/07/21) -언제까지 필요하신가요? When do you need it? -서류를 속달로 보내겠습니다. I will send the document by express mail. -모델 WG 135 의 견적을 부탁 드립니다? I ask you an estimate for the model WG 135.
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A.) What are the benefits of hot springs?

 

Hot spring water is naturally heated and contains various minerals, Its warmth could help people relax their stress

and alleviate fatigue or pain. 

  

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(05/07/21)

 

-언제까지 필요하신가요?

When do you need it? 

 

OR 

=> When do you need it by?

-서류를 속달로 보내겠습니다.

I will send the document by express mail.

=> I will send the documents by express mail.

 

-모델 WG 135 의 견적을 부탁 드립니다?

I ask you an estimate for the model WG 135.

=> Could you please quote the price for model WG 135?

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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