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   제 목   my favorite planet.    상 태  
   교정강사   Lovely(D)O    등록일   2022-05-31
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  My favorite planet is Earth. Because it's the planet we're living and in Earth the creatures can live in the Earth. So I like Earth.
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My favorite planet is Earth.

Because, it's the planet we're living in.

In Earth, all creatures can live here.

So I like Earth.