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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-06-03
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  A.) Are you a health-conscious person? Please elaborate on your answer. Yes I really think so. Because I am interseted in cooking vegan foods. I usually watch the ways about making healthy food in Youtube. B.) Make these sentences into English. -저는 직장을 그만뒀어요. I quit my job. -당신을 해고해야 합니다. We must fire you. -저희 회사는 1980년도에 설립되었습니다. Our company was founded in 1980.
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A.) Are you a health-conscious person? Please elaborate on your answer.

Yes I really think so. Because I am interseted in cooking vegan foods. I usually watch the ways about making healthy food in Youtube.

=> Yes, I really think so. Because I am interested in cooking vegan foods. I usually watch the ways of making healthy food on YouTube.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

-저는 직장을 그만뒀어요.

I quit my job.  

 

-당신을 해고해야 합니다.

We must fire you. 

 

 

-저희 회사는 1980년도에 설립되었습니다.

Our company was founded in 1980. 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.