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   교정강사   Enya(C)    등록일   2022-06-08
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  HOMEWORK: A. At what age do people usually get married in your country? What do you think is a good age to marry? Many people get married at their early 30s. In my opinion the appropriate marriage age is late 20s. but most of 20s don't have enough money to get married. B. Make these sentences into English. (06/08/22) 1. 저희 제품은 최대한의 효율성을 제공합니다. Our products supply the maximal efficiency. 2. 최첨단의 소재를 사용합니다. Our products was used state-of-the-art materials. 3. 저희 제품은 해외시장에서 좋은 평판을 얻고 있습니다. Our products are getting a good reputation through the overseas markets.
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​HOMEWORK:

A. At what age do people usually get married in your country? What do you think is a good age to marry?

Many people get married at their early 30s. In my opinion the ideal age to get married is late 20s, but most people in their 20s don't have enough money to get married.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(06/08/22)

1. 저희 제품은 최대한의 효율성을 제공합니다.

Our products supply the maximal efficiency. => Our product provides maximum efficiency.

2. 최첨단의 소재를 사용합니다.

Our products was used state-of-the-art materials. => We use cutting edge materials.

3. 저희 제품은 해외시장에서 좋은 평판을 얻고 있습니다.

Our products are getting a good reputation through the overseas markets.=> Our products have a good reputation in foreign markets.

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