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   교정강사   Lovely(D)O    등록일   2022-06-14
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  I like the sea because at summer and when I swim in sea it is cool and I like swimming in the water. and seas are very beautiful so I like sea.
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I like the sea on summer.

When I swim in the sea, it's cool.

I like swimming in the water.

It's also beautiful so I like it.