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   제 목   Where should statues of former leaders be erected?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-06-14
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  A.) Where should statues of former leaders be erected? Please elaborate on your answer. A statue has the function to remind people of a figure. If the figure could be abhorred by someone, his or her statue must not be erected there. So statues of former leaders would be good to be erected in their birthplace. B.) Make these sentences into English. (06/13/22) -그 여자애는 나 한테 마음이 없는 것 같아서 포기했어. She seemed indifferent to me so that I gave up. -당신도 알겠지만 내가 말주변이 없잖아. As you know, I am awkward in speaking. -명성이 자자하세요 You are well known.
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A.) Where should statues of former leaders be erected? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

 A statue has the function to remind people of a figure.

 If the figure could be abhorred by someone, his or her statue must not be erected there.

 So statues of former leaders would be good to be erected in their birthplace.    

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(06/13/22)

 

-그 여자애는 나 한테 마음이 없는 것 같아서 포기했어.

 She seemed indifferent to me so that I gave up.  ​

 

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  She didn’t seem interested in me, so I gave up.

 

-당신도 알겠지만 내가 말주변이 없잖아.

As you know, I am awkward in speaking.

=>  You know I’m not good with words.

 

-명성이 자자하세요

 You are well known.  

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.