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   제 목   2022-06-17    상 태  
   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2022-06-17
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  A. What is one thing you’ve never done but would like to do? It is skydiving. When I was young, I sometimes dreamed to fly high. That time, I wanted to see the sky and clouds. And now we can fly! There are many places to do it but I will go to Switzerland and do it there. Because the landscape of the country is so amazing for me. I'm looking forward to skydiving there someday. B. -이번 회의를 기대하고 있어요. I'm looking forward to this meeting. -모두 모였으니 회의를 시작합시다. Everyone is here, so let's start the meeting. -오늘 의논할 사항이 많으니 시작하는 게 좋을 것 같습니다. It would be good to start as we have many things to discuss.
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A. What is one thing you’ve never done but would like to do?

It is skydiving. When I was young, I sometimes dreamed to fly high. That time, I wanted to see the sky and clouds. And now we can fly! There are many places to do it but I will go to Switzerland and do it there. Because the landscape of the country is so amazing for me. I'm looking forward to skydiving there someday.

 

 

B.

-이번 회의를 기대하고 있어요. I'm looking forward to this meeting.

 

-모두 모였으니 회의를 시작합시다. Everyone is here, so let's start the meeting.  -> Since everyone is here, we should get started.

-오늘 의논할 사항이 많으니 시작하는 좋을 같습니다. It would be good to start as we have many things to discuss. -> We have a lotto cover today, so we should begin.

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