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   제 목   Should the number of people climbing Mount Everest each year be limited?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-06-19
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  A.) Should the number of people climbing Mount Everest each year be limited? Please elaborate on your answer. Climbing the Everest can not be an ordinary thing. Anyone who dreams of it could not carry it out. Only a few could execute and succeed. So it need not be worried to limit the number of climbers. B.) Make these sentences into English. (06/17/22) -이제 감을 잡으셨군요. You have a clue. -높은 베개에 길들여졌어요. I am accustomed to a high pillow. -우리는 말이 통하고 취향이 비슷해요. We have similar opinions and tastes.
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A.) Should the number of people climbing Mount Everest each year be limited? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Climbing the Everest can not be an ordinary thing.

Anyone who dreams of it could not carry it out.

Only a few could execute and succeed.

So it need not be worried to limit the number of climbers. 

 

=> Climbing the Mt. Everest can not be an ordinary thing.

Anyone who dreams of it could not carry it out.

Only a few could execute and succeed.

So, it need not be worried to limit the number of climbers. ​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(06/17/22)

 

-이제 감을 잡으셨군요.

 You have a clue.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> ​Now you’re getting the hang of it. 

 

-높은 베개에 길들여졌어요.

 I am accustomed to a high pillow.  

 

-우리는 말이 통하고 취향이 비슷해요. 

 We have similar opinions and tastes.  


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.