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   교정강사   Kristina(C)    등록일   2021-05-10
   작성내용
  -What countries would you like to visit? -어떤 나라를 방문하고 싶습니까? -I want to visit the Philippines. -저는 필리핀을 방문하고 싶습니다. (05/10/21) -저것은 뭐니? -이것은 무엇이니? -이것은 가방이야. (05/10/21) -What is that? -What is this? -This is a bag.
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What countries would you like to visit? 

-I want to visit the Philippines. (You may also give reasons why you want to visit the Philippines. Thank you!♥)


(05/10/21)

-저것은 뭐니? -What is that? 

-이것은 무엇이니? -What is this? 

-이것은 가방이야. -This is a bag. *It's a book bag.

~> Your sentences have correct grammatical structure, but these have the correct usage/expression.​​