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   제 목   Should NATO continue to expand?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-07-24
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  A.) Should NATO continue to expand? Please elaborate on your answer. NATO's continual expansion could be a threat to Russia. It would lead Russia to break world peace. So NATO must stop its expansion. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/18/22) 1. 눈 깜짝한 사이에 갔다 왔어요. I have been there in a twinkle. 2. 이 자판기가 돈을 먹었어요. This vending machine swallowed coins/money. 3. 내가 가징 필요로 할 때 나한테 등을 돌리더라니까. He betrayed me when his help was necessary.
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A.) Should NATO continue to expand? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

NATO's continual expansion could be a threat to Russia.

It would lead Russia to break world peace.

So NATO must stop its expansion. ✔

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/18/22)

 

1. 눈 깜짝한 사이에 갔다 왔어요.

    I have been there in a twinkle.

=> I was there and back in the blink of an eye.

 

2. 이 자판기가 돈을 먹었어요.

    This vending machine swallowed coins/money. ✔

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3. 내가 가징 필요로 할 때 나한테 등을 돌리더라니까.

    He betrayed me when his help was necessary. ✔​

 

​• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​