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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-05-12
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  A. When do you feel best? In the morning, afternoon, or evening? Why I feel best in the evening. I go to the table tennis club almost every evening. When I play table tennis with my partner, I am happy. I am kind of night owl so it's very hard for me to get up early in the morning. Fortunatly, my husband works at night and he gets up late in the morning. So we have brunch everyday. I usually watch Youtube postings on my smartphone and TV. In order to have productive time, I often write poems and learn English^^* (05/10/21) -그는 완전히 미쳤다. -He is totally insane. -이 망원경은 지극히 효과적이다. -This telescope is quite effective. -Robert는 상당히 똑똑하다. -Robert is very smart.
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A. When do you feel best? In the morning, afternoon, or evening? Why

 

I feel best in the evening. I go to the table tennis club almost every evening. When I play table tennis with my partner, I am happy. I am kind of night owl so it's very hard for me to get up early in the morning. Fortunately, my husband works at night and he gets up late in the morning. So, we have brunch every day. I usually watch YouTube videos on my smartphone and TV. In order to have a productive day. I often write poems and learn English^^*

 

 (05/10/21)

-그는 완전히 미쳤다.

-He is totally insane. -> He is completely insane.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

- 망원경은 지극히 효과적이다.

-This telescope is quite effective.  -> This telescope is extremely powerful.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

-Robert 상당히 똑똑하다. -Robert is very smart.  ->Robert is fairly intelligent.

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.