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   제 목   What questions would you like to ask Ms. Phan Thi?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-08-05
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  A.) What questions would you like to ask Ms. Phan Thi? Please elaborate on your answer. I saw the picture ' Napalm Girl' in a newspaper very long years ago. Since then, I have not forget it and wondered how the girl has been grown up . I want to ask Ms. Phan Thi how she could overcome the sad past. B.) Make these sentences into English. (08/03/22) 1. 걔한테 상처만 줄 거야. It would be nothing but hurt to him or her. 2. 시간이 없어서 손에 잡히는 대로 담았어. I had no time to arrange them after putting by hand. 3. 회사 일 때문에 스트레스를 너무 많이 받아서 그래. That is because I have been too much stressed from work.
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A.) What questions would you like to ask Ms. Phan Thi? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

 I saw the picture ' Napalm Girl' in a newspaper  very long years ago.

 Since then, I have not forget it and wondered how the girl has been grown up .

 I want to ask Ms. Phan Thi  how she could overcome the sad past.  

 

=>   I saw the picture "Napalm Girl" in a newspaper very long years ago.

 Since then, I have not forgotten it and wondered how the girl has grown up.

 I want to ask Ms. Phan Thi, how she could overcome the sad past.  ​


 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(08/03/22)

 

1. 걔한테 상처만 줄 거야.

   It would be nothing but hurt to him or her.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  You’ll only hurt her feelings.

 

2. 시간이 없어서 손에 잡히는 대로 담았어.

   I had no time to arrange them after putting by hand.

=> I was pressed for time, so I just grabbed what I could.

 

3. 회사 일 때문에 스트레스를 너무 많이 받아서 그래.

   That is because I have been too much stressed from work. 

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  It’s because I’m getting stressed out at work.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.