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   제 목   Writing homework(21.5.12)    상 태  
   교정강사   Sarah(C)    등록일   2021-05-12
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  Q:Where do you want to go, if there's no corona virus? Why? A: I want to go to the amusement park with my friends. Because it must be fun. -비가 왔거든. It was rain. -그래서 뭐했니? 집에 돌아왔니? So what did you do? Did you come back to home? -응, 그랬어. Yes I did.
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​Q:Where do you want to go, if there's no corona virus? Why?

A: I want to go to the amusement park with my friends. Because it must be fun.

=> I want to go to the amusement park with my friends. I think it will be fun. => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.​​

 

 

 

-비가 왔거든.

It was rain. => Because it was rainy? => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.​​

 

-그래서 뭐했니? 집에 돌아왔니?

So what did you do? Did you come back to home? => Then, what did you do? Did you go back home? => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.​​

 

-응, 그랬어.

Yes I did. (correct)