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   교정강사   Niah(C)    등록일   2022-08-16
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  A. What is your favorite dessert? Why? How often do you eat it? I love ice cream. I eat it once in a day. But I have to quit eating ice cream. Because it makes me gain a lot of weight. B. Make these sentences into English. (08/16/22) 1. 안녕, 돌돌아, 반가워. 2. 안녕,심순아,방학 어땠니? 3. 멋졌어. 나는 뉴욕에 있는친구 브래드의 집에 갔었어. -Hi, Doldol, Good to see you. -Hi, Simsoon, How's your vacation? -It was nice. I went to my friend Brad's house in New York.
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A. What is your favorite dessert? Why? How often do you eat it?

I love ice cream. I eat it once in a day. But I have to quit eating ice cream. Because it makes me gain a lot of weight. (Correct)

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(08/16/22)

 

1. 안녕, 돌돌아, 반가워.

2. 안녕,심순아,방학 어땠니?

3. 멋졌어. 나는 뉴욕에

있는친구 브래드의 집에

갔었어.

-Hi, Doldol, Good to see you.   (Correct)

 

-Hi, Simsoon, How's your vacation?  (Correct)

 

-It was nice. I went to my friend Brad's house in New York. (Correct)​​