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   교정강사   Niah(C)    등록일   2022-08-18
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  A. Write about a time when you were at the hospital. When My brother was sick, I went to the hospital with him. I saw a girl cried a lot because she didn't want to get a shot. She is four years older than my brother. My brother was five years old and didn't cry and got a shot. B. Make these sentences into English. (08/18/22) 1. 대단했지. 나는 제주도에 갔었어. 2. 재미있는 방학을 보냈구나. 3. 응, 너무 즐거운 방학을 보냈어. -It was great. I went to Jeju island. -You had a great vacation. -Yes. I had really excited vacation.
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A. Write about a time when you were at the hospital.

When My brother was sick, I went to the hospital with him. I saw a girl cried a lot because she didn't want to get a shot. She is four years older than my brother. My brother was five years old and didn't cry and got a shot. (Correct)

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(08/18/22)

 

1. 대단했지. 나는 제주도에

갔었어.

2. 재미있는 방학을

보냈구나.

3. 응, 너무 즐거운 방학을

보냈어.

-It was great. I went to Jeju island. (Correct)

 

-You had a great vacation. (Correct)

 

-Yes. I had really excited vacation. --> Yes, I had a good vacation.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.