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   교정강사   Arah(C)    등록일   2022-09-01
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  Hello Arah♥ I think all kinds of languages are difficult to study. But English is not too dificult to learn because we can have many opportunities to learn. English is an international language so we can easily access. It's up to our time and effort. 1. I rolled up my sleeves. 2. I'm sure it'll turn up. 3. Please turn down the volume.
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Hi, Ji-young! ♡♡

I think all kinds of languages are difficult to study. ✔

But English is not too difficult to learn because we can have many opportunities to learn. ✔​

English is an international language so we can easily access.  ✔​

It's up to our time and effort. ✔

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1. I rolled up my sleeves. -> I turned up my sleeves. 

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

2. I'm sure it'll turn up. ✔​

3. Please turn down the volume.​  ✔