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   교정강사   Bea(D)O    등록일   2022-09-06
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  Today, number 11 typhoon came our town. so I didn't go school. But luckily, there aren't hurt people in my family. And after the typhoon pass I go to the academy.
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Hello Claire, 

Thank you for messaging, but I'm glad to hear about you. I hope you're doing well. 

 

Better say: Today, a number 11 typhoon came to our town. So I didn't go to school. But luckily, there aren't hurt people in my family. 

And after the typhoon passed, I went to the academy.​