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   제 목   What did the heavy rain at Death Valley cause?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-09-06
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  A.) What did the heavy rain at Death Valley cause? Please elaborate on your answer. The heavy rain flooded the valley to tumble rocks down the mountainsides. It also washed away the sand and other debris on the basin and disconnected roads. B.) Make these sentences into English. (09/05/22) 1. 갑자기 헷갈리네 All at once, I got confused. 2. 어떡하지? 깜빡했어 What should I do? I forgot about it. 3. 내버려 뒤. Let it be.
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A.) What did the heavy rain at Death Valley cause? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

    The heavy rain flooded the valley to tumble rocks down the mountainsides.

 It also washed away the sand and other debris on the basin and disconnected roads.   ✔

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(09/05/22)

 

1. 갑자기 헷갈리네

   All at once, I got confused.  ✔​

 

 

2. 어떡하지? 깜빡했어

   What should I do?  I forgot about it.  ✔​

 

 

3. 내버려 뒤.

    Let it be.  ✔

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• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​