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   교정강사   Niah(C)    등록일   2022-09-20
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  A. What do you do when your'e bored? I text with my friend or just spacing out. Or drink water. It can makes me feel better. B. Make these sentences into English. (09/20/22) 1. 이건 푸푸야, 사랑스러운 강아지야.푸푸는빨리 달릴 수 있어. 2. 이건 코코야. 코코는 귀여운 고양이야. 코코는 파란 눈을 가지고 있어. 3. 이건 토토야. 토토는 좋은 거북이야.토토는 물 속에서 걸을 수도 있어 -This is pupu, the lovely puppy. He can run fast. -This is coco. It's a cute kitten. She has blue eyes. -This is toto. It's a good turtle. He can walk in to water.
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A. What do you do when your'e bored?

I text with my friend or just spacing out. Or drink water. It can makes me feel better.

--> I text/chat with my friend or just spacing out. Also, I drink water. It can make me feel better.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(09/20/22)

 

1. 이건 푸푸야, 사랑스러운

강아지야.푸푸는빨리 달릴 수

있어.

2. 이건 코코야. 코코는 귀여운

고양이야. 코코는 파란 눈을

가지고 있어.

3. 이건 토토야. 토토는 좋은

거북이야.토토는 물 속에서 걸을

수도 있어

-This is pupu, the lovely puppy. He can run fast. (Correct)

-This is coco. It's a cute kitten. She has blue eyes.  (Correct)

 

-This is toto. It's a good turtle. He can walk in to water.  --> This is Toto. He's a good turtle. He can walk under the water.