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   제 목   Why did the virus not affect many island nations for a long time?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-09-24
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  A.) Why did the virus not affect many island nations for a long time? Since the pandemic was declared, all travel to the island nations stopped. That might have prevented the virus from being transmitted to the nations. That would be why they were not affected by the virus. B.) Make these sentences into English. (09/19/22) 1. 지금의 한국 경제는 일본의 전철을 밟고 있는 것 같아요 The current economy of Korea seems to repeat that of Japan. 2. 지독한 곱슬머리를 주체 못해 이렇게 해 봤어요 As I could not control my severely curled hair, I changed it to this. 3. 내가 항상 직설적으로 말하는 거 알잖아 You have already known that I always speak directly.
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A.) Why did the virus not affect many island nations for a long time?

 

Since the pandemic was declared, all travel to the island nations stopped.

That might have prevented the virus from being transmitted to the nations.

That would be why they were not affected by the virus.  

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(09/19/22)

 

1. 지금의 한국 경제는 일본의 전철을 밟고 있는 것 같아요

    The current economy of Korea seems to repeat that of Japan.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  I think Korea’s economy is following in the footsteps of Japan’s.

 

2. 지독한 곱슬머리를 주체 못해 이렇게 해 봤어요

    As I could not control my severely curled hair, I changed it to this.    

 

3. 내가 항상 직설적으로 말하는 거 알잖아

    You have already known that I always speak directly. 

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.