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   제 목   In the past, how do people protect themselves from the enemy?    상 태  
   교정강사   Lovely(D)O    등록일   2022-09-27
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  In the past how do people protect themselves from the enemy? They just made weapon like knives,guns and so on. So they protected them selves with weapons. Ye..that's all. You know it.
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CORRECTIONS:
 

 In the past, how do people protect themselves from the enemy?

​They just made weapons like knives, guns, and so on.
(Please be careful with the proper punctuation.)

 

​So they could protect themselves with the weapons.

(Do not separate the​ pronoun.)

 

​Yeah. That's all.

You know it. ​

(Always use​ complete words.)