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   제 목   2021.05.11. homework    상 태  
   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2021-05-13
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  HOMEWORK: A. What is your favourite breakfast, lunch and dinner? Please tell me why. : My favourite food(soul food) is seasoned spicy chicken with sparking water. I usually eat this food on Friday night with my brother. Because tomorrow is holiday, I can eat the food relaxing mood. I can forget bad memory(about working) with this food. I love the crispy texture of chicken and the feeling of soda. B. Make these sentences into English. -그는 벽돌을 아주 빨리 쌓을 수 있다. : He can pile the bricks very fast. -거짓말 하지 마. : Don't lie. -잠깐 엔진 좀 작동시켜 보겠어요? : Can you activate the engine for a while?
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HOMEWORK:

A. What is your favourite breakfast, lunch and dinner? Please tell me why.

 

: My favourite food(soul food) is seasoned spicy chicken with sparking water.

  I usually eat this food on Friday night with my brother. 

  => I usually eat this food on Friday nights with my brother. ​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  

 

 

Because tomorrow is  holiday, I can eat the food relaxing mood.

  => Because the next day is a holiday. I can eat food in a relaxed mood.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  

 

  I can forget bad memory(about working) with this food. 

  => I can forget the bad memories (about working) with this food.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  


I love the crispy texture of chicken and the feeling of soda.    

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

-그는 벽돌을 아주 빨리 쌓을 수 있다. : He can pile the bricks very fast.

  => He is able to lay bricks very quickly.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.  


-거짓말 하지 마. : Don't lie.

=> Don't lie to me.​

=> Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it.

 

-잠깐 엔진 좀 작동시켜 보겠어요? : Can you activate the engine for a while?

​​=> Could you run the engine for a moment?​

=> Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it.