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   교정강사   Lovely(D)O    등록일   2022-10-20
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  In 1900, the average family had an annual income of $3,000 (in today's dollars). The family had no indoor plumbing, no phone, and no car. About half of all American children lived in poverty. Most teens did not attend school; instead, they labored in factories or fields.
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CORRECTIONS:


In 1900, the average family had an annual income of $3,000 (in today's dollars).

The family had no indoor plumbing, no phone, and no car.

About half of all American children lived in poverty.

Most teens did not attend school; instead, they labored in factories or fields.

 

COMMENT:

You did a great job for doing your homework, Alex! But I noticed that your answer to my questions was from the website: https://www.digitalhistory.uh.edu/disp_textbook.cfm?smtID=2&psid=3175 . I hope that you'll paraphrase the article next time! ^^