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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-10-21
   작성내용
  A.) Could geoengineering ideas solve global warming? Please elaborate on your answer. I have been concerned about the global warming. I knew that reducing the fossil fuel is the only way for the global warming. So I was shocked to hear of geoengineering's idea of refreezing the poles through spraying sulphate aerosol to reflect sunlight. Despite its drawback, the way would be the solution for the global warming. B.) Make these sentences into English. (10/21/22) 1. 약속을 펑크 내서 정말 죄송해요. I am so sorry to break the promise. 2. 정말 피를 말리는군요. You are really killing me. 3. 탁구는 내가 한 수 위야. I am more than a match for you at Ping-pong.
   교정내용
 

A.) Could geoengineering ideas solve global warming? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

I have been concerned about the global warming.

I knew that reducing the fossil fuel is the only way for  the global warming.

So I was shocked to hear of geoengineering's  idea of refreezing the poles through spraying sulphate aerosol to reflect sunlight.

Despite its drawback, the way would be the solution for the global warming.

 

=>  I have been concerned about global warming.

I knew that reducing fossil fuel is the only way to global warming.

So I was shocked to hear of geoengineering's idea of refreezing the poles by spraying sulfate aerosol to reflect sunlight.

Despite its drawback, the way would be the solution to global warming.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(10/21/22)

 

1. 약속을 펑크 내서 정말 죄송해요.

    I am so sorry to break the promise. 

 

2. 정말 피를 말리는군요.

    You are really killing me.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  This is really killing me.

   

3. 탁구는 내가 한 수 위야.

    I am more than a match for you at Ping-pong.

=>  You’re no match for me in ping-pong.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.