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   제 목   Do I believe in supernatural powers? -home work    상 태  
   교정강사   Lovely(D)O    등록일   2022-11-01
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  As a fact I don't believe supernatural powers. Because It has no evidence. And if you are saying that I've seen supernatural powers in videos! Don't belive it it's all edit. So I don't believe supernatural powers.
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As a matter of fact, I don't believe in supernatural powers. 

Please use proper punctuations in a sentence.

 

Because it has no evidence.

And if you are saying that you've seen supernatural powers in videos, don't believe it.

It's all edited.

You can use punctuation as well to make a whole sentence with two different clauses.

 

So I don't believe in supernatural powers.