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   제 목   Why do you think wildlife workers wanted people to be involved in the project?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-12-09
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  A.) Why do you think wildlife workers wanted people to be involved in the project? Please elaborate on your answer. Each animal has its own habitats. Reintroducing animals to a foreign region would not be likely to succeed. Residents' activities could conflict with those of animals. Residents' caution would be necessary for the reintroduced to settle. So the wildlife workers wanted people to be involved in the project. B.) Make these sentences into English. (12/02/22) 1. 약속을 연기할 수 있습니까? Do you mind if I defer the appointment? 2. 모든 일은 한 시간 뒤로 미루어야 합니다. All schedules should be postponed to one hour later. 3. 점심 약속을 다른 날로 미뤄도 될까요? Is it ok that our lunch date be put off to another day?
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A.) Why do you think wildlife workers wanted people to be involved in the project? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Each animal has its own habitats. 

Reintroducing animals to a foreign region would not be likely to succeed. 

Residents' activities could conflict with those of animals.  

Residents' caution would be necessary for the reintroduced to settle.

So the wildlife workers wanted people to be involved in the project.    

       

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/02/22)

 

1. 약속을 연기할 수 있습니까?

Do you mind if I defer the appointment?

Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

=>  Could we postpone our meeting?

 

2. 모든 일은 한 시간 뒤로 미루어야 합니다.

All schedules should be postponed to one hour later.  

 

 

3. 점심 약속을 다른 날로 미뤄도 될까요?

Is it ok that our lunch date be put off to another day?

Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  ​Could we put off our lunch meeting?


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.